Reborn heard from tsuna’s mother that there would be a parents meeting the next day, Reborn, all cooped up in the house because of his previous fiascos, was dying to hhave some fun. When everyone else was asleep, he drew out the plans for the next day.
The next day, a student fell extremely sick, and had to be escorted by the teacher to the sick bay. Not wanting to waste the chance, Reborn promptly got dressed in his best suit and pretended to be a relief teacher.
After gaining the trust of the gullible parents by writing overly-complex questions with no answers on the board, reborn was ready to have his fun. Slowly, he asked the students one by one for the answer, and if they could not give one, Reborn threw bombs at them.
Later on, the bombing game was starting to get old. Reborn then claimed that it was time to raise their IQ the scientific way. Once again, after providing nonsensical evidence that if they were put in an electrical chair, they would grow smarter, Reborn continued with his torturous game.
After a while, the parents were aware of his tricks and eventually managed to chase him out. But Reborn did not care, he had had his fair share of fun, and now it was time to go back home.
Dear Ming En
ReplyDeleteI liked your story excerpt very much. You managed to bring out the mischievous side of Reborn through actions, thoughts as well as some work of his mischief. However, there should be more description of characters in your excerpt. Some examples can include the appearance of Reborn.
Thank You.
Zane 2a1(33)
I thought the story excerpt was good. You managed to describe Reborn well but there are a few spelling mistakes like: Arcobaleno instead of Archebalengo, have instead of hhave. All in all, there are many sides to Reborn but you only provided the mischievous side of him. In a nutshell, I think it was good.
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